Hi Grace,I really like the way you added lots of detail to your work. To improve you could make the font different just so we can see it properly, overall you did a great job and I enjoyed reading your summary. Keep up the good work. :)
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Hi Grace, I really enjoy the creativity and the facts you have put into this work of yours.Next time you should think about the font to make sure you people can see and check your punctuation.Keep up the great work.Edith