tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8924599358102508816.post3696941159447207645..comments2024-03-06T00:31:05.966+13:00Comments on Grace : WALT: Plan for WritingTPSBlogOwner4http://www.blogger.com/profile/00541767221376341453noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8924599358102508816.post-32390270969651005812017-09-01T10:52:20.332+12:002017-09-01T10:52:20.332+12:00Thank you everyone for your advice
Thank you everyone for your advice<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8924599358102508816.post-88418267419664137452017-09-01T10:50:22.959+12:002017-09-01T10:50:22.959+12:00Hi Grace,
I really love this narrative you have ma...Hi Grace,<br />I really love this narrative you have made. You have added so much detail which is so AMAZING! And you have added some powerful words which adds tension to your story. To improve you could and more commas and full stops to make your sentences shorter. Other then that you done a great job! Keep it up Grace!<br /><br />Love,<br />LydiaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8924599358102508816.post-17010726857397804692017-08-31T14:39:35.664+12:002017-08-31T14:39:35.664+12:00Hi, I really like those descriptive language and u...Hi, I really like those descriptive language and using powerful words. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8924599358102508816.post-75980376059970810432017-08-17T11:33:16.457+12:002017-08-17T11:33:16.457+12:00Hi, i really love how you have lots of detail and ...Hi, i really love how you have lots of detail and powerful words in your story. keep up the good work 😉😉😉😉Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com